This is the video of our rough cut screening were we received feedback for a draft of our music video.In the beginning of this feedback video, a member of the group outlines(sephora) explains why we had failed to add much lip sync in our clips,to explain why there is limited footage that is shown because we had to change and delete a lot of footage because they were no longer relevant to what we decided to do for our new idea. The positive feedback that stood out me is that "use of colours and lighting in graffiti shots were nicely lit and worked well the song". This was good to hear because we really spent time when filming trying to make the colours stand out against the graffiti as well. But i think the negative feedback was most useful because gave us inspiration and a sense of direction.Add more effects between shots, which we really took literally because we focused on adding transitions effects such as, film dissolve.The feedback was very useful and we all really appreciate the feedback when we completing are final filming also, useful when doing the editing process. this is direct feedback from our target audience age range, therefore, we could analyze what exactly we are missing.